From: Stitman, Charles [EMAIL PROTECTED]
To be honest I've always both liked and hated your stories.
You'd be surprised how often I get this response, especially with regards to
my Thy Outward Part sereis. =)
Mythologically, the changing of ones form into another is either a curse
or a
for
Ranma, and at the same time her concerns for catching her husband. I don't
think its unreasonable for her to be thinking both at once.
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I got it at 12:30 yesterday afternoon.
On Aug 9, 2007, at 12:16 PM, James Kahle wrote:
IS it just me or has the actual fic have yet to hit the list?
Jimu RetroGuru, the Player To Be Named Later.
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Have to say, upon first reading it, I thought the opening quote
would foreshadow Ranma's behavior. In the end, though, it's
just like the quote from your previous work in the sense that it
functions on several levels: not only is it directly relevant to the
protagonist (in this case, Yoko,) but
A facial shot of a teenage man, nearly a year older than _she_.
older than _her_ is grammatically correct.
Yes, she breathed out, _she_ closing her eyes
This she is unnecessary and should be deleted. This error is repeated
throughout the text with various pronouns.
Remembering that, Ataru
