--One among you--
This isn't how I expected it to be.
--What do you expect to do--
My body...I can barely move it. It hurts...
--will shortly perish--
The words spoken by the dour child echo in the infinite, the shape of the
small mouth forming that portent of death looming like a spectre,
When speaking of Jusenkyo what about the spring of drowned twins,
Um...did you even READ the chapter? Jusenkyo isn't an option. Period, end of
sentence. Even if it WERE it wouldn't be, because this is post-v38, and
Jusenkyo is completely flooded.
I *very deliberately* took every measure I could
Disclaimer: Not for commercial use. The characters in this fan fiction
work are used without permission, as I do not own the rights to Ranma
1/2. But I do own quite a few Ranma DVDs and manga... does that count?
The Courtship of Tendou Kasumi
A Ranma 1/2 shortfic
written by Ambulatory Kettle
Well done. I could definitely feel the angst here and can picture
this scene in the game exactly as you wrote it. Luckily there was a
happier ending, eh?
Overall a beautiful little character piece into our hero's head. Now
get back to Fire in the Water! It's good too!
On Thu, Mar 6, 2008 at
Y'know, this rather reminds me of my very first fanic, Heart of the Home.
I've always enjoyed Kasumi and I like reading stories about her.
I'd urge you to keep going, I like what you've written so far.
-Richard
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