Re: [FFML] [fanfic][repost] NGE: EndGame, 02

2008-02-18 Thread Chen Yong
First of all, thank you for the CC, which provided some insight as to why your moniker is called DeepFriedPuppies. No, I'm not being sarcastic. The comments and wit were as enjoyable as they were helpful. :) From: [EMAIL PROTECTED] To: ffml@chez-vrolet.net Date: Mon, 18 Feb 2008 12:36:34

[FFML] [fanfic][SI] NGE: EndGame, 03

2008-02-23 Thread Chen Yong
Rei is MASSIVELY OOC. I apologize deeply. :( A coherent explanation will be revealed over the next two chapters. There are also a few scenes which might hit the mark I was aiming for, but then again, might just turn out to be crappily cheesy. As usual, I've tried to read it myself for errors,

Re: [FFML] [SI] NGE: EndGame, 03

2008-02-26 Thread Chen Yong
Date: Mon, 25 Feb 2008 21:47:44 -0800 From: [EMAIL PROTECTED] To: ffml@chez-vrolet.net Subject: Re: [FFML] [SI] NGE: EndGame, 03 From: Chen Yong [EMAIL PROTECTED] Obligingly Maya obeyed, bending over to take a better look at the penetron screen. Just one critique for now--I might have