RE: FLUXLIST: Fluxlist Blog - Narrow Cream Sonnet

2006-04-14 Thread Allan Revich








Hey! 

 

And when JMB forwarded it to the list it
was magically resonnetized for me too.

 

Allan

 









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Subject: RE: FLUXLIST: Fluxlist
Blog - Narrow Cream Sonnet



 

Well it came sonnetistic to me and that narrow cream did indeed pull my
eye, in fact i even have a little chapbook title Shoulder Cream so now must
think of narrow shoulder cream or shoulder narrow cream or cream narrow
shoulder and so on

wave cream on the blinking precipice,
john

At 04:02 PM 4/13/2006, you wrote:



Well it was a sonnet when I wrote it, but not when I got it. And now as
I
write this it is a sonnet again.
The wonders of technology seem to have taken some creative liberties of
their own.

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Sent: Thursday, April 13, 2006 3:46 PM
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Subject: RE: FLUXLIST: Fluxlist Blog - Narrow Cream Sonnet

Narrow Cream

Narrow cream could be one of John's
Or arrow dream could be a weapon dream
And pharaoh theme might be one of anon's
Barrow seams breaking over the ship's beam

Whatever one wishes to believe or to think
One must often fight for two or too well
Because when the sun sets on the precipice brink
One never forgets that lust-worn sea swell

Sometimes it is easy to simply forge ahead
Over hot coals in a champagne tulip glass
Placing ones memories at the foot of the bed
Lacing slipper sandals with a ring of brass

I often forget who is running the show
Or maybe it's true that I never did know


Allan Revich
April 13, 2006-04-13

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Sent: Thursday, April 13, 2006 2:35 PM
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On 1427 Rabi? I 14, at 11:58 AM, Allan Revich wrote:

> 1) Archive - sure go ahead, there is a heck of a lot of activity
>
> 2) Could be your equipment - on my PC the cream part looks to0 narrow!
> (1280 x 1024)


"Narrow cream" sounds like it could be one of John's poems...
(or maybe "Nar row C ream").

BTW, I have no poetry.


R~~

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RE: FLUXLIST: Fluxlist Blog - Narrow Cream Sonnet

2006-04-14 Thread John M. Bennett


Well it came sonnetistic to me and that narrow cream did
indeed pull my eye, in fact i even have a little chapbook title Shoulder
Cream so now must think of narrow shoulder cream or shoulder narrow cream
or cream narrow shoulder and so on
wave cream on the blinking precipice,
john
At 04:02 PM 4/13/2006, you wrote:
Well it was a sonnet when I
wrote it, but not when I got it. And now as I
write this it is a sonnet again.
The wonders of technology seem to have taken some creative liberties
of
their own.
-Original Message-
From: [EMAIL PROTECTED]
[
mailto:[EMAIL PROTECTED]] On
Behalf Of Allan Revich
Sent: Thursday, April 13, 2006 3:46 PM
To: FLUXLIST@scribble.com
Subject: RE: FLUXLIST: Fluxlist Blog - Narrow Cream Sonnet
Narrow Cream
Narrow cream could be one of John's
Or arrow dream could be a weapon dream
And pharaoh theme might be one of anon's
Barrow seams breaking over the ship's beam
Whatever one wishes to believe or to think
One must often fight for two or too well
Because when the sun sets on the precipice brink
One never forgets that lust-worn sea swell
Sometimes it is easy to simply forge ahead
Over hot coals in a champagne tulip glass
Placing ones memories at the foot of the bed
Lacing slipper sandals with a ring of brass
I often forget who is running the show
Or maybe it's true that I never did know

Allan Revich
April 13, 2006-04-13
-Original Message-
From: [EMAIL PROTECTED]
[
mailto:[EMAIL PROTECTED]] On
Behalf Of Rod Stasick
Sent: Thursday, April 13, 2006 2:35 PM
To: FLUXLIST@scribble.com
Subject: Re: FLUXLIST: Fluxlist Blog

On 1427 Rabi? I 14, at 11:58 AM, Allan Revich wrote:
> 1) Archive - sure go ahead, there is a heck of a lot of
activity
>
> 2) Could be your equipment - on my PC the cream part looks to0
narrow!
> (1280 x 1024)

"Narrow cream" sounds like it could be one of John's
poems...
(or maybe "Nar row C ream").
BTW, I have no poetry.

R~~

__
Dr. John M. Bennett 
Curator, Avant Writing Collection
Rare Books & Manuscripts Library
The Ohio State University Libraries
1858 Neil Av Mall
Columbus, OH 43210 USA
(614) 292-3029
[EMAIL PROTECTED]

www.johnmbennett.net
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RE: FLUXLIST: Fluxlist Blog - Narrow Cream Sonnet

2006-04-13 Thread Allan Revich
Well it was a sonnet when I wrote it, but not when I got it. And now as I
write this it is a sonnet again.
The wonders of technology seem to have taken some creative liberties of
their own.

-Original Message-
From: [EMAIL PROTECTED] [mailto:[EMAIL PROTECTED] On
Behalf Of Allan Revich
Sent: Thursday, April 13, 2006 3:46 PM
To: FLUXLIST@scribble.com
Subject: RE: FLUXLIST: Fluxlist Blog - Narrow Cream Sonnet

Narrow Cream

Narrow cream could be one of John's
Or arrow dream could be a weapon dream
And pharaoh theme might be one of anon's
Barrow seams breaking over the ship's beam

Whatever one wishes to believe or to think
One must often fight for two or too well
Because when the sun sets on the precipice brink
One never forgets that lust-worn sea swell

Sometimes it is easy to simply forge ahead
Over hot coals in a champagne tulip glass
Placing ones memories at the foot of the bed
Lacing slipper sandals with a ring of brass

I often forget who is running the show
Or maybe it's true that I never did know


Allan Revich
April 13, 2006-04-13

-Original Message-
From: [EMAIL PROTECTED] [mailto:[EMAIL PROTECTED] On
Behalf Of Rod Stasick
Sent: Thursday, April 13, 2006 2:35 PM
To: FLUXLIST@scribble.com
Subject: Re: FLUXLIST: Fluxlist Blog


On 1427 Rabi? I 14, at 11:58 AM, Allan Revich wrote:

> 1) Archive - sure go ahead, there is a heck of a lot of activity
>
> 2) Could be your equipment - on my PC the cream part looks to0 narrow!
> (1280 x 1024)


"Narrow cream" sounds like it could be one of John's poems...
(or maybe "Nar row C ream").

BTW, I have no poetry.


R~~








RE: FLUXLIST: Fluxlist Blog - Narrow Cream Sonnet

2006-04-13 Thread Allan Revich
Narrow Cream

Narrow cream could be one of John's
Or arrow dream could be a weapon dream
And pharaoh theme might be one of anon's
Barrow seams breaking over the ship's beam

Whatever one wishes to believe or to think
One must often fight for two or too well
Because when the sun sets on the precipice brink
One never forgets that lust-worn sea swell

Sometimes it is easy to simply forge ahead
Over hot coals in a champagne tulip glass
Placing ones memories at the foot of the bed
Lacing slipper sandals with a ring of brass

I often forget who is running the show
Or maybe it's true that I never did know


Allan Revich
April 13, 2006-04-13

-Original Message-
From: [EMAIL PROTECTED] [mailto:[EMAIL PROTECTED] On
Behalf Of Rod Stasick
Sent: Thursday, April 13, 2006 2:35 PM
To: FLUXLIST@scribble.com
Subject: Re: FLUXLIST: Fluxlist Blog


On 1427 Rabi? I 14, at 11:58 AM, Allan Revich wrote:

> 1) Archive - sure go ahead, there is a heck of a lot of activity
>
> 2) Could be your equipment - on my PC the cream part looks to0 narrow!
> (1280 x 1024)


"Narrow cream" sounds like it could be one of John's poems...
(or maybe "Nar row C ream").

BTW, I have no poetry.


R~~