[Bug 218068] Typo in zh_TW version of top-level documentation

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[Bug 218069] Small Typos in Introduction Chapters in Handbook

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[Bug 218070] ral.4 Grammar fix

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[Bug 218072] Extraneous Comma in Cutting-Edge Documentation

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[Bug 218071] stale link in Developer's Handbook

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Summary|dead link   |stale link in Developer's
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[Bug 218073] Minor typo in the synopsis of multimedia documentation in Handbook (7.1)

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Summary|Minor typo in the synopsis  |Minor typo in the synopsis
   |of multimedia documentation |of multimedia documentation
   |(7.1)   |in Handbook (7.1)
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[Bug 218076] Removed broken link in Handbook

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[Bug 218076] Removed broken link in Handbook

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[Bug 218080] Broken Link

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[Bug 218083] Link to PC-BSD Users Handbook broken

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[Bug 218077] Typo in 17.11.2 (effect vs affect)

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[Bug 218077] Typo in 17.11.2 (effect vs affect)

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--- Comment #1 from commit-h...@freebsd.org ---
A commit references this bug:

Author: maxim
Date: Fri Mar 24 17:48:02 UTC 2017
New revision: 50083
URL: https://svnweb.freebsd.org/changeset/doc/50083

Log:
  Grammar.

  PR:   218077
  Reported by:  philcioni

Changes:
  head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/disks/chapter.xml

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[Bug 218080] Broken Link

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Bug ID: 218080
   Summary: Broken Link
   Product: Documentation
   Version: Latest
  Hardware: Any
OS: Any
Status: New
  Severity: Affects Only Me
  Priority: ---
 Component: Documentation
  Assignee: freebsd-doc@FreeBSD.org
  Reporter: du...@rpi.edu

Created attachment 181155
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Bug Fix

Link to simplified chinese
(http://lists.cn.freebsd.org/mhttp://lists.cn.freebsd.org/mailman/listinfoailman/listinfo)
is broken

https://www.freebsd.org/community/mailinglists.html

Link removed, could be replaced with proper link

https://svnweb.freebsd.org/doc/head/en_US.ISO8859-1/htdocs/community/mailinglists.xml

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[Bug 218077] Typo in 17.11.2 (effect vs affect)

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Bug ID: 218077
   Summary: Typo in 17.11.2 (effect vs affect)
   Product: Documentation
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OS: Any
Status: New
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 Component: Documentation
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  Reporter: philci...@gmail.com

The line "The new quota limits take affect upon exiting the editor." should
read "The new quota limits take effect upon exiting the editor." (effect vs
affect)

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[Bug 218076] Removed broken link

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URL||https://www.freebsd.org/doc
   ||/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/hand
   ||book/network-dns.html#idp76
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[Bug 218076] Removed broken link

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Bug ID: 218076
   Summary: Removed broken link
   Product: Documentation
   Version: Latest
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OS: Any
Status: New
  Severity: Affects Some People
  Priority: ---
 Component: Documentation
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Created attachment 181151
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diff file of changes made for the documentation

In chapter 28.7 in the handbook there was a link
(https://data.iana.org/root-anchors/root-anchors.asc) that resulted in a 404
error. I have removed the link and worded the sentence slightly differently.

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[Bug 218075] Updated Sentence in wlan4

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URL||https://www.freebsd.org/cgi
   ||/man.cgi?query=wlan%284%29&
   ||apropos=0=3
   ||=FreeBSD+11.0-RELEASE+and+P
   ||orts=default=ht
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[Bug 218075] Updated Sentence in wlan4

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Bug ID: 218075
   Summary: Updated Sentence in wlan4
   Product: Documentation
   Version: Latest
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  Reporter: halfnote1...@gmail.com

Made the sentence in wlan4 easier to understand.

Original Sentence: 
Beware that this specification is incompatible with earlier drafts;and stations
implementing earlier drafts (e.g. Linux) may not interoperate.

Updated Sentence:
Be aware that this specification is incompatible with earlier drafts. 
Stations implementing earlier drafts (e.g. Linux) may be incompatible.

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[Bug 218072] Extraneous Comma in Cutting-Edge Documentation

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  Component|Advocacy|Documentation

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[Bug 218074] Confusingly worded sentence in ports section of handbook

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Bug ID: 218074
   Summary: Confusingly worded sentence in ports section of
handbook
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Status: New
  Severity: Affects Some People
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  Reporter: pho...@rpi.edu

Created attachment 181150
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attatched diff

I have found and fixed a confusingly worded sentence in the ports chapter of
the handbook, located at https://www.freebsd.org/doc/handbook/ports-using.html
in section 4.5.1.1. I have attached the diff.

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[Bug 218073] Minor typo in the synopsis of multimedia documentation (7.1)

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Bug ID: 218073
   Summary: Minor typo in the synopsis of multimedia documentation
(7.1)
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  Severity: Affects Many People
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 Component: Documentation
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  Reporter: shanal...@gmail.com

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minor typo change

"Playback" as a single word is a noun, and not a verb. On this page
(https://svnweb.freebsd.org/doc/head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/multimedia/chapter.xml?view=log)
the word "playback" was used as a verb in the first paragraph of 7.1 Synopsis
and should be changed to two words, "play back".

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[Bug 218071] dead link

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--- Comment #1 from Maxim Konovalov  ---
Hello Ian,

Amazon still has this book:

https://www.amazon.com/80287-I-B-M-Personal-Computer-Compatibles/dp/013246604X

We need just replace the dead link with it perhaps.

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[Bug 218072] Extraneous Comma in Cutting-Edge Documentation

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Bug ID: 218072
   Summary: Extraneous Comma in Cutting-Edge Documentation
   Product: Documentation
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 Component: Advocacy
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  Reporter: sam...@chame.co
CC: freebsd-doc@FreeBSD.org

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Remove unnecessary comma

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[Bug 218071] dead link

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Bug ID: 218071
   Summary: dead link
   Product: Documentation
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Status: New
  Severity: Affects Many People
  Priority: ---
 Component: Documentation
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  Reporter: ri...@rpi.edu

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dead link fix

On the page
https://www.freebsd.org/doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/developers-handbook/x86-fpu.html
the link that leads to " Richard Startz' 8087/80287/80387 for the IBM PC &
Compatibles " is dead and displays an internal server error.

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[Bug 218070] ral.4 Grammar fix

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Bug ID: 218070
   Summary: ral.4 Grammar fix
   Product: Documentation
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Status: New
  Severity: Affects Only Me
  Priority: ---
 Component: Documentation
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  Reporter: bass...@rpi.edu

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Grammar Fix diff file

In the 2nd paragraph of the Description, there are improper uses of 'an' that
needs to be changed to 'a'.

In the last paragraph of the CAVEATS Section contains unclear wording and
misuse of plurals.

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[Bug 218069] Small Typos in Introduction Chapters

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Bug ID: 218069
   Summary: Small Typos in Introduction Chapters
   Product: Documentation
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OS: Any
Status: New
  Severity: Affects Only Me
  Priority: ---
 Component: Documentation
  Assignee: freebsd-doc@FreeBSD.org
  Reporter: djpe...@me.com

Created attachment 181145
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The diff file for the chapter that I changed.

In the introduction chapter of the Handbook, particularly, under the list of
companies that use FreeBSD, there seem to be some small typos.

First of all, the Stormshield section is written in the first person, which
does not seem correct.

Second, the Weather Channel section is missing an apostrophe.

I've included a diff of the chapter.xml file for the introduction which fixes
the problem.

Furthermore, here is a link to the relevant page:

https://www.freebsd.org/doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/nutshell.html

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[Bug 218068] Typo in zh_TW version

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Bug ID: 218068
   Summary: Typo in zh_TW version
   Product: Documentation
   Version: Latest
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OS: Any
Status: New
  Severity: Affects Only Me
  Priority: ---
 Component: Documentation
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  Reporter: m...@rpi.edu

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Typo

In Taiwan, the correctly way of using documentation is 文檔 rather than 文件.

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[Bug 218060] [PATCH]Little addition to the ezjail-admin section

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Bug ID: 218060
   Summary: [PATCH]Little addition to the ezjail-admin section
   Product: Documentation
   Version: Latest
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OS: Any
Status: New
  Keywords: patch
  Severity: Affects Only Me
  Priority: ---
 Component: Documentation
  Assignee: freebsd-doc@FreeBSD.org
  Reporter: ger...@macclub-os.de
  Keywords: patch

Created attachment 181128
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[PATCH]Addition to the ezjails section in the jails section.

Hi,

I added a suggestion for the ezjail-admin section in en_US.ISO8859-1 section of
the handbook. 
Please consider using it.
I could also provide the German translation.
If I made mistakes please advise.

Best regards
Gerrit

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