[Bug 204704] [patch] Typos in website at /features.html

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Christian Brueffer  changed:

   What|Removed |Added

 Resolution|--- |FIXED
 Status|New |Closed
 CC||bruef...@freebsd.org

--- Comment #2 from Christian Brueffer  ---
Committed, thanks!

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[Bug 204704] [patch] Typos in website at /features.html

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--- Comment #1 from commit-h...@freebsd.org ---
A commit references this bug:

Author: brueffer
Date: Tue Dec 15 18:16:48 UTC 2015
New revision: 47864
URL: https://svnweb.freebsd.org/changeset/doc/47864

Log:
  Several minor wording, spelling and grammar improvements.

  PR:204704
  Submitted by:scottchel...@gmail.com

Changes:
  head/en_US.ISO8859-1/htdocs/features.xml

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[Bug 204704] [patch] Typos in website at /features.html

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Bug ID: 204704
   Summary: [patch] Typos in website at /features.html
   Product: Documentation
   Version: Latest
  Hardware: Any
OS: Any
Status: New
  Keywords: patch
  Severity: Affects Many People
  Priority: ---
 Component: Website
  Assignee: freebsd-doc@FreeBSD.org
  Reporter: scottchel...@gmail.com
  Keywords: patch

Created attachment 163358
  --> https://bugs.freebsd.org/bugzilla/attachment.cgi?id=163358=edit
patch for typo fixes

Some misc. typos at http://www.freebsd.org/features.html:

While "world-wide" is acceptable, "worldwide" is preferred.

"introduced" should be "introduces" in order to maintain present tense with
"replaces."

"These allow" seems awkward.  Why not, "Together, they provide"?

"ABI preserving" should be "ABI-preserving."

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