Author: jtn
Date: Wed Jan 20 01:22:56 2016
New Revision: 31502

URL: http://svn.gna.org/viewcvs/freeciv?rev=31502&view=rev
Log:
Make it clearer that offering a city in a treaty clause puts it on the
potential recipient's map before the treaty is finalised.

See gna bug #24206.

Modified:
    branches/S2_5/data/helpdata.txt

Modified: branches/S2_5/data/helpdata.txt
URL: 
http://svn.gna.org/viewcvs/freeciv/branches/S2_5/data/helpdata.txt?rev=31502&r1=31501&r2=31502&view=diff
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--- branches/S2_5/data/helpdata.txt     (original)
+++ branches/S2_5/data/helpdata.txt     Wed Jan 20 01:22:56 2016
@@ -228,7 +228,7 @@
 Under authoritarian governments such as Monarchy you can break a \
 pact at any time, but the representative governments (Republic and \
 Democracy) have a senate which will block the unprovoked \
-cancellation of a treaty; unless a foreign Diplomat or Spy sparks \
+cancelation of a treaty; unless a foreign Diplomat or Spy sparks \
 a diplomatic incident, the only way to dissolve a pact in this \
 situation is to dissolve your government.  The details of pacts are \
 described in the Diplomacy section.\
@@ -240,9 +240,9 @@
    - You can only request property that you know about; so you \
 can't request technology unless you have an embassy, and if \
 you can't see a city on your map, then you can't request it.  \
-Of course, the owner of that city can still give it to \
+Of course, the owner of that city can still offer it to \
 you, in which case the area around the city is shown \
-on your map.\
+on your map before you accept the treaty.\
 "), _("\
    - One important thing to note: when a city is transferred, \
 any units in the field and supported by that city are also \


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