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commit f2237dfca889c40f45fee2f4167c404f0466ee0c
Author: Russell Dickenson (phayz) <russelldicken...@gmail.com>
Date:   Thu Jul 23 22:07:57 2009 +1000

Documentation - network.txt

* Grammatical and spelling corrections

diff --git a/docs/network.txt b/docs/network.txt
old mode 100644
new mode 100755
index eed9fe8..3c0bd23
--- a/docs/network.txt
+++ b/docs/network.txt
@@ -20,15 +20,15 @@ least two parts, separated by a dot (.).
. In the next dialog, you should choose how your machine connects to the 
network.
If you have an internal network card and an assigned IP address, gateway, and
DNS, use static to enter these values. If your IP address is assigned by a
-DHCP server (commonly used by cable modem services, not equal to dsl
-services), select dhcp. In case you've got a DSL connection (eg. ADSL) chose
+DHCP server (commonly used by cable modem services, not equal to DSL
+services), select dhcp. In case you've got a DSL connection (eg. ADSL) choose
the dsl option! Finally, if you do not have a network card,
-select the lo choice. The lo is also the correct choice if you are
+choose the lo choice. The lo is also the correct choice if you are
using a PCMCIA network card.
+
-When you set up the network first question will be the interface you want to 
set up.
+When you set up the network, the first question will be the interface you want 
to set up.
It is usually eth0, but it can differ when you set up wireless interfaces for 
example.
-If you set up a wireless card netconfig will also ask your ESSID and 
encription key.
+If you set up a wireless card netconfig will also ask your ESSID and 
encryption key.

.. If you chose static, you must give your IP address, the netmask of your
local network, your gateway address (you may leave it blank) and the IP
@@ -39,9 +39,9 @@ by editing the '/etc/resolv.conf' file) and then the 
configuration is finished.
netconfig will not ask more questions about your network, since all
other data will be provided by the DHCP server.

-.. In dsl part you must give your username, something like 
'some...@provider.net'.
+.. If you chose dsl, you must give your username, something like 
'some...@provider.net'.
Then you'll have to specify the network interface (usually eth0) through
-which the ADSL connecting script will try to communicate with your ADSL
+which the ADSL connection script will try to communicate with your ADSL
modem. Then enter your password twice.

.. If you chose lo, you don't have to answer any questions.
@@ -49,8 +49,8 @@ modem. Then enter your password twice.
. Finally, netconfig will write all your network configuration files. If you
want to edit your settings by hand, the interface information is stored in
the '/etc/sysconfig/network' directory. There is only one file there called
-default in most cases. It's because you can set up more then one profile.
-It's very useful when you got a laptop so you can set up options for all
+default in most cases. It's because you can set up more than one profile.
+It's very useful if you have a laptop so that you can set up options for all
networks you use.

== Basic firewall configuration
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