[Audyssey] Sarah's story from PCS Games

2008-12-24 Thread Phil Vlasak
Happy Holidays folks. This is the first three chapters of the story I am writing about, Sarah Goode and the castle of witchcraft and wizardry by Phil Vlasak Disclaimer: This story is based on characters and situations created and owned by JK Rowling, various publishers including but not limited

Re: [Audyssey] Sarah's story from PCS Games

2008-12-24 Thread Pranav Lal
Phil, I am confused about the timelines. Other than that, it is a good story but a shade long. --- Gamers mailing list __ Gamers@audyssey.org If you want to leave the list, send E-mail to gamers-unsubscr...@audyssey.org. You can make changes or update your subscription via the web, at

Re: [Audyssey] Sarah's story from PCS Games

2008-12-24 Thread Phil Vlasak
pranav@gmail.com To: 'Gamers Discussion list' gamers@audyssey.org Sent: Wednesday, December 24, 2008 2:04 PM Subject: Re: [Audyssey] Sarah's story from PCS Games Phil, I am confused about the timelines. Other than that, it is a good story but a shade long. --- Gamers mailing list

Re: [Audyssey] Sarah's story from PCS Games

2008-12-24 Thread Pranav Lal
Wow! Since you intended it as a novel, then my comment about the length does not apply. Pranav --- Gamers mailing list __ Gamers@audyssey.org If you want to leave the list, send E-mail to gamers-unsubscr...@audyssey.org. You can make changes or update your subscription via the web, at