[Gen-art] review of draft-ietf-dhc-dual-stack-04.txt

2006-02-15 Thread john . loughney
Document seems reasonable. Its informational and is acceptable. No-obj. ___ Gen-art mailing list Gen-art@ietf.org https://www1.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/gen-art

RE: [Gen-art] Reviews uploaded for Feb 16th, 2006

2006-02-15 Thread Scott Brim \(sbrim\)
How does one review a MIB anyway? I can barely spell it. ___ Gen-art mailing list Gen-art@ietf.org https://www1.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/gen-art

RE: [Gen-art] Reviews uploaded for Feb 16th, 2006

2006-02-15 Thread Mary Barnes
My approach was to review them from the perspective of determining if the applicability of the MIB could be clearly understood from the overview text and made sense to me at a high level. Other than that, I always included a disclaimer/assumption that the doc had been reviewed by a MIB doctor.

[Gen-art] Gen-Art Review: draft-ietf-msec-newtype-keyid-01.txt

2006-02-15 Thread Elwyn Davies
Background for those on the CC list, who may be unaware of GenART: GenART is the Area Review Team for the General Area of the IETF. We advise the General Area Director (i.e. the IETF/IESG chair) by providing more in depth reviews than he could do himself of documents that come up for final

[Gen-art] Gen-ART Review of draft-ietf-ipoib-connected-mode-02.txt

2006-02-15 Thread Spencer Dawkins
I was selected as General Area Review Team reviewer for this specification (for background on Gen-ART, please see http://www.alvestrand.no/ietf/gen/art/gen-art-FAQ.html). Summary: This document is on the right track for publication as a Proposed Standard. I do have some comments, but overall

[Gen-art] Re: Gen-Art Review: draft-ietf-msec-newtype-keyid-01.txt

2006-02-15 Thread Lakshminath Dondeti
Hi Elwyn, Thanks for your review. I interpret the word cost as cost of an attack, which is a perfectly acceptable term in analyzing security properties of a protocol or a mechanism. Your wording is also fine. I don't have strong feelings either way. GMARCH is a typo and should be GKMARCH