Thanks for the feedback Joel. Comments in-line.
Jim
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From: Joel M. Halpern [mailto:[EMAIL PROTECTED]
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Subject: [rddp] Re: [Gen-art] IETF LC reviews: rddp
Thank you. The changes you propose would address the minor issues.
Yours,
Joel
At 10:31 AM 4/25/2006, Jim Pinkerton wrote:
Thanks for the feedback Joel. Comments in-line.
Jim
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Summary: basically ready with nits
I strongly recommend to convert the document to a tool like xml2rfc
before to send it to the RFC editor!
Other concerns:
- the document should specify which kind of namespace registration is
asked for (I've assume formal)
- so there must be an IANA
Attached is my review of the specified document, submitted as part of
the Gen-ART process. For background on Gen-ART, please see the FAQ at
http://www.alvestrand.no/ietf/gen/art/gen-art-FAQ.html.
Document:
http://www.ietf.org/internet-drafts/draft-ietf-iptel-tel-np-09.txt
Comments:
The
