[Gen-art] draft-ietf-sip-eku-05.txt

2009-06-08 Thread Francis Dupont
I have been selected as the General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) reviewer for this draft (for background on Gen-ART, please see http://www.alvestrand.no/ietf/gen/art/gen-art-FAQ.html). Please resolve these comments along with any other Last Call comments you may receive. Document:

Re: [Gen-art] Gen-ART LC Review of draft-ietf-geopriv-http-location-delivery-14

2009-06-08 Thread Mary Barnes
The wording on this topic in this section and in the security section (9.1) are not really as consistent as it should be in terms of normative language - the security section describes the capabilities in terms of what MUST be provided/implemented by a LIS and client implementation, but not

Re: [Gen-art] Gen-ART LC Review of draft-ietf-geopriv-http-location-delivery-14

2009-06-08 Thread Ben Campbell
Hi Mary, The part I was trying to highlight was the lack of client device authentication, not LIS authentication. If I read 9.1 right, it only covers authentication of the LIS. I assume there is no expectation that client devices present TLS certs to the LIS, right? Again, I'm not saying

Re: [Gen-art] Gen-ART LC Review of draft-ietf-geopriv-http-location-delivery-14

2009-06-08 Thread Mary Barnes
Hi Ben, Thanks for your third Gen-ART review of this document. My responses are inline below, with the exception of the Minor issue you highlight to which I responded in a separate email. Mary. -Original Message- From: Ben Campbell [mailto:b...@estacado.net] Sent: Thursday, June 04,

Re: [Gen-art] Gen-ART LC Review of draft-ietf-geopriv-http-location-delivery-14

2009-06-08 Thread Mary Barnes
Hi Ben, So, you are talking about section 9.3 which does state that the LIS ensures that the client is authenticated, per the following: The LIS MUST verify that the client is the target of the returned location, i.e., the LIS MUST NOT provide location to other entities than the target.

Re: [Gen-art] Gen-ART LC Review of draft-ietf-geopriv-http-location-delivery-14

2009-06-08 Thread Ben Campbell
Again, my point was not to say that this was necessarily a problem--I highlighted it as something the IESG should think about, knowing that they have a big reading load. I guess my question is, is the statement that reverse routability provides sufficient assurance in many cases, along

Re: [Gen-art] Gen-ART LC Review of draft-ietf-geopriv-http-location-delivery-14

2009-06-08 Thread Mary Barnes
I guess I'm still missing your original concern. But, one problem with that sentence is that it's really out of context and would make more sense if it were the first sentence in the last paragraph in section 8, as that then leads to the text on the recommended mechanism (i.e., TLS). The sentence