[Gen-art] announced review of draft-ietf-tcpm-tcp-timestamps-02.txt

Before sending the review of draft-ietf-tcpm-tcp-timestamps-01.txt I detected a new version... francis.dup...@fdupont.fr ___ Gen-art mailing list Gen-art@ietf.org https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/gen-art

[Gen-art] review of draft-ietf-tcpm-tcp-timestamps-02.txt

(note: I was a bit late to send the review so I updated it to the new version which was published between review time and today) I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. For background on Gen-ART, please see the FAQ at http://wiki.tools.ietf.org/area/gen/trac/wiki/GenArtfaq. Please

[Gen-art] review of draft-turner-md5-seccon-update-07.txt

I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. For background on Gen-ART, please see the FAQ at http://wiki.tools.ietf.org/area/gen/trac/wiki/GenArtfaq. Please resolve these comments along with any other Last Call comments you may receive. Document: draft-turner-md5-seccon-update-07.txt

Re: [Gen-art] review of draft-ietf-tcpm-tcp-timestamps-02.txt

Hi, thanks for the review. Fernando, please see if you want to address any of these in your working copy. (But don't post a new revision until after the document has been discussed by the IESG.) Thanks, Lars On 2010-12-10, at 11:23, Francis Dupont wrote: (note: I was a bit late to send the

Re: [Gen-art] review of draft-turner-md5-seccon-update-07.txt

Francis, Thanks for your review. Responses inline. spt On 12/10/10 4:45 AM, Francis Dupont wrote: I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. For background on Gen-ART, please see the FAQ at http://wiki.tools.ietf.org/area/gen/trac/wiki/GenArtfaq. Please resolve these comments along

Re: [Gen-art] [tcpm] review of draft-ietf-tcpm-tcp-timestamps-02.txt

Hi, Lars, I will respond to Francis' comments this weekend and address his comments shortly. Thanks! Kind regards, Fernando On 12/10/10, Lars Eggert lars.egg...@nokia.com wrote: Hi, thanks for the review. Fernando, please see if you want to address any of these in your working copy.

Re: [Gen-art] Gen-art review of draft-ietf-xmpp-3920bis-19

Hi Elwyn, Thanks for your reply. Unfortunately I got impatient and submitted a revised I-D earlier today (-20), but I can always submit another one if needed. Version numbers are cheap. :) Comments inline. On 12/10/10 11:18 AM, Elwyn Davies wrote: Hi, Peter. Sorry I was not responsive on

Re: [Gen-art] (full) review of draft-ietf-dime-rfc3588bis-25.txt

francis.dup...@fdupont.fr [mailto:francis.dup...@fdupont.fr] writes: ... Nits/editorial comments: Technical: - 13 page 147: I have a concern about 'TLS or IPsec handshake' because there is no such thing like 'IPsec handshake'. I suggest to ask IPsec people to check if this must