[Gen-art] review of draft-ietf-v6ops-ra-guard-implementation-04.txt (summary)

-04.txt Reviewer: Francis Dupont Review Date: 20120606 IETF LC End Date: 20120612 IESG Telechat date: unknown Summary: Ready Major issues: None Minor issues: None Nits/editorial comments: I am currently at a conference so I have not the time to type the few comments now. Thanks francis.dup

Re: [Gen-art] Gen-ART Telechat review of draft-ietf-mile-iodef-xmlreg-01.txt

Hi, Suresh, Thanks for the comment; yes, this one is a bit hard to parse (even for me, and I tend to write page-length sentences). I've tweaked your suggested text somewhat and applied to the current working copy of the -02 revision. Best regards, Brian On Jun 5, 2012, at 5:53 PM, Suresh

Re: [Gen-art] Gen-ART LC review of draft-ietf-spfbis-experiment-09.txt

Hi Brian, At 03:36 06-06-2012, Brian E Carpenter wrote: Please see attached review. Thanks for the review. I think the Conclusions and Appendix A are almost entirely correct. Major issues: - IMHO section 3.1 needs several clarifications: These surveys selected substantial sets