(this message was stuck by the problems of the art.tools.ietf.org box but without too much trouble as the summary went through in time)
I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. For background on Gen-ART, please see the FAQ at <http://wiki.tools.ietf.org/area/gen/trac/wiki/GenArtfaq>. Please resolve these comments along with any other Last Call comments you may receive. Document: draft-ietf-v6ops-ra-guard-implementation-04.txt Reviewer: Francis Dupont Review Date: 20120606 IETF LC End Date: 20120612 IESG Telechat date: unknown Summary: Ready Major issues: None Minor issues: None Nits/editorial comments: - ToC Page 2: RA Guard -> RA-Guard - ToC page 2: Acknowledgements -> Acknowledgments - 1 page 3: a funny fact is DHCPv4 (which IMHO is not really over IP) is not sensible to this attack, at the opposite of DHCPv6... - 2 page 4, title: RA Guard -> RA-Guard - 3 page 9, point 6: in fact IPsec has its own issue with fragmentation... Nevertheless I agree with the proposed text. - 6 page 13: i.e. -> i.e., and e.g. -> e.g., - 7 page 14: Acknowledgements -> Acknowledgments - B page 18: organisations -> organizations Thanks francis.dup...@fdupont.fr _______________________________________________ Gen-art mailing list Gen-art@ietf.org https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/gen-art
