[Gen-art] GEN-ART last call review of draft-ietf-ccamp-rsvp-te-eth-oam-ext

2014-04-09 Thread Scott Brim
I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. For background on Gen-ART, please see the FAQ at . Please resolve these comments along with any other Last Call comments you may receive. Document: draft-ietf-ccamp-rsvp-te-eth-oam-ext-11

Re: [Gen-art] Gen-ART review of draft-drage-sipping-rfc3455bis-13

2014-04-09 Thread Martin Thomson
On 9 April 2014 05:41, Jari Arkko wrote: > Have there been any responses or changes based on your comments? I do not see > the document version having changed... I have seen no response or revision. ___ Gen-art mailing list Gen-art@ietf.org https://ww

Re: [Gen-art] Gen-ART review of draft-ietf-trill-esadi-06.txt

2014-04-09 Thread Black, David
Hi Donald, I think we're basically done here. For [4], I would like to see stronger requirements in the security text, but I can accept what's proposed below as an improvement. Please ensure that a good security reviewer (e.g., a sec-dir reviewer) takes a look at that new text as well as the res

Re: [Gen-art] Gen-ART review of draft-ietf-trill-esadi-06.txt

2014-04-09 Thread Donald Eastlake
Hi David, On Tue, Apr 8, 2014 at 4:58 PM, Black, David wrote: > Donald, > > Thank you for the extensive comments on the review. I'll summarize here > rather than add more text inline. I'm fine with the proposed course of > action for anything not mentioned here: OK. It is good sign when the am

Re: [Gen-art] Gen-art last call review of draft-ietf-mpls-psc-updates-03.txt (review type corrected).

2014-04-09 Thread Eric Osborne
Hi Elwyn- Thanks for the comments. I'll make sure they're addressed before publication. I also have other comments but they're along the same lines as yours, and those will be integrated too. eric On Fri, Apr 4, 2014 at 2:58 PM, Elwyn Davies wrote: > (Sorry... got the wrong review type

Re: [Gen-art] Gen-ART review of draft-drage-sipping-rfc3455bis-13

2014-04-09 Thread Jari Arkko
Thanks for the review, Martin. Have there been any responses or changes based on your comments? I do not see the document version having changed... Jari On Feb 28, 2014, at 1:43 AM, Martin Thomson wrote: > I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. For background on > Gen-ART, please s