David,
Thanks a lot for your detailed review and comments.
Here are the details of responses. I have also attached the updated document.
Major issues:
[1] Operational considerations: There appears to be more than enough enabled
by this draft
to wreak serious operational havoc,
Hello Dan,
Thank you very much for your review! My comments are in-line.
* "Romascanu, Dan (Dan)"
> 1. In the second paragraph of the Introduction I suggest s/The
> Explicit Address Mapping Table does not replace/Translation using the
> Explicit Address Mapping Table
Most of the nits/editorial comments are fine. Two follow-ups:
> -- 3.1. TLV format
>
>Type : TBA, Suggested value 10
>
> Please add an RFC Editor Note asking the RFC Editor to replace this with the
> actual IANA-assigned value.
> Does the RFC Editor Note go as part of this document.
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David> Inline. I'll deal with the A-D issues here and the editorial
David> items/nits in a separate message.
> David,
>
> Thanks a lot for your detailed review and comments.
>
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> --- Minor issues:
>
> -- 3.2 Elements of procedure:
>
> [A] I see what look like some