Hello Dan
Many thanks for your review. Apologies for the delayed response ( I just got
back from vacation)
Please see inline for responses to concerns raised (with [[Suhas]] Markings)
Cheers
Suhas Nandakumar
From: Romascanu, Dan (Dan)
Hi Jouni,
David and I work on it to address your comments.
Thanks,
Lucy
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From: Jouni Korhonen [mailto:jouni.nos...@gmail.com]
Sent: Thursday, August 18, 2016 10:40 AM
To: Lucy yong; gen-art@ietf.org (gen-art@ietf.org);
draft-ietf-tsvwg-gre-in-udp-encap@ietf.org
Hi Lucy,
See inline ;)
8/12/2016, 2:10 PM, Lucy yong kirjoitti:
Hi Jouni,
OOPS, forget this one, sorry.
o My “complaint” of this document is basically on the following.. these are
writing
style things so feel free to neglect:
- It repeats.. the same statements multiple times.
Lucy:
Hi Lucy,
Thank you for the response. Sorry for my slow response. I tried to be on
a vacation last week/weekend so my checking of emails was sparse at best
;) See inline.
8/12/2016, 1:51 PM, Lucy yong kirjoitti:
Hi Jouni,
Thank you for the review and correction. Pls see inline below.
Thanks for the review, Dan! And Alan for edits.
Jari
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Thanks for your review, Vijay.
And you have some good questions… to which I have not seen answers. Authors?
Jari
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Many thanks for your review, Robert.
Jari
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Thanks for your review, Roni!
Authors, did you observe the editorial suggestions?
Jari
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