[Gen-art] Review of draft-ietf-justfont-toplevel-05

2016-12-09 Thread Dale Worley
Reviewer: Dale Worley Review result: On the Right Track I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed by the IESG for the IETF Chair. Please wait for direction from your document shepherd or AD before posting

Re: [Gen-art] Gen-ART IETF Last Call review of draft-ietf-justfont-toplevel-03

2016-12-09 Thread Dale R. Worley
My apologies; I should have responded quicker on this. But I don't think there are any comments here that affect the draft. The various wording matters I've not reviewed carefully, as I've already pointed out my questions and I'll defer to the authors on their resolution. But I see a technical

[Gen-art] Review of draft-harkins-owe-05

2016-12-09 Thread Lucy Yong
Reviewer: Lucy Yong Review result: Ready with Nits The draft is nearly ready for the publication. Minor comment: Suggest adding this in security considerations: OWE provides encryption over the wireless medium, i.e., Wi-Fi without authentication. Thus it does not provide security for end-to-end