Re: [Gen-art] Genart last call review of draft-nottingham-rfc5785bis-08

2019-02-05 Thread Mark Nottingham
Hi Erik! > On 6 Feb 2019, at 6:10 pm, Erik Kline wrote: > > > Nits/editorial comments: > > [1] I assume the URIs in 6.3 are also meant to be deleted upon publication? Not all of them; just the ones referenced from the section that's marked for deletion. > [2] WRT to the final lines of 5.1:

Re: [Gen-art] Genart telechat review of draft-ietf-lisp-rfc6833bis-24

2019-02-05 Thread Dino Farinacci
Okay. I will keep the last paragraph only. Thanks. Dino > On Feb 5, 2019, at 7:59 PM, Benjamin Kaduk wrote: > > On Tue, Feb 05, 2019 at 07:56:39PM -0800, Dino Farinacci wrote: >>> Nits/editorial comments: Section 2: Get rid of everything except the last >>> paragraph. >> >> Are you sure? I j

Re: [Gen-art] Genart telechat review of draft-ietf-lisp-rfc6833bis-24

2019-02-05 Thread Benjamin Kaduk
On Tue, Feb 05, 2019 at 07:56:39PM -0800, Dino Farinacci wrote: > > Nits/editorial comments: Section 2: Get rid of everything except the last > > paragraph. > > Are you sure? I just followed what RFC 8174 suggested. Give me reason to not > follow it? Yes, he's sure. You pasted the text that 81

Re: [Gen-art] Genart telechat review of draft-ietf-lisp-rfc6833bis-24

2019-02-05 Thread Dino Farinacci
> Nits/editorial comments: Section 2: Get rid of everything except the last > paragraph. Are you sure? I just followed what RFC 8174 suggested. Give me reason to not follow it? Dino ___ Gen-art mailing list Gen-art@ietf.org https://www.ietf.org/mailma

[Gen-art] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-pim-igmp-mld-yang-10

2019-02-05 Thread Dale Worley
Reviewer: Dale Worley Review result: Ready with Nits I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed by the IESG for the IETF Chair. Please treat these comments just like any other last call comments. For more i

[Gen-art] Genart telechat review of draft-ietf-lisp-rfc6833bis-24

2019-02-05 Thread Pete Resnick
Reviewer: Pete Resnick Review result: Ready with Nits I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed by the IESG for the IETF Chair. Please wait for direction from your document shepherd or AD before posting a ne

Re: [Gen-art] Genart telechat review of draft-ietf-pce-wson-rwa-ext-11

2019-02-05 Thread Alissa Cooper
Elwyn, thanks for your reviews. Young, thank you for your responses. I entered a No Objection ballot. Alissa > On Jan 29, 2019, at 8:02 PM, Leeyoung wrote: > > Hi Elwyn, > > Thanks for further review and confirming the acceptance of the most of the > edits while pointing out a few items to b

Re: [Gen-art] Genart last call review of draft-hollenbeck-vcarddav-icann-rdap-extensions-00

2019-02-05 Thread Roni Even (A)
Scott thanks for clarifying to me. I have no further comments Roni -Original Message- From: Gen-art [mailto:gen-art-boun...@ietf.org] On Behalf Of Hollenbeck, Scott Sent: Monday, February 04, 2019 2:33 PM To: ron.even@gmail.com; gen-art@ietf.org Cc: i...@ietf.org; draft-hollenbeck-vcar