[Gen-art] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-lpwan-ipv6-static-context-hc-21

2019-08-06 Thread Pete Resnick via Datatracker
Reviewer: Pete Resnick Review result: Ready with Issues I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed by the IESG for the IETF Chair. Please treat these comments just like any other last call comments. For

[Gen-art] Genart telechat review of draft-ietf-curdle-ssh-ed25519-ed448-09

2019-08-06 Thread Linda Dunbar via Datatracker
Reviewer: Linda Dunbar Review result: Ready I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed by the IESG for the IETF Chair. Please wait for direction from your document shepherd or AD before posting a new version

Re: [Gen-art] [lamps] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-lamps-cms-mix-with-psk-05

2019-08-06 Thread Russ Housley
Robert: > Reviewer: Robert Sparks > Review result: Ready with Issues > > I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area > Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed > by the IESG for the IETF Chair. Please treat these comments just > like any other

Re: [Gen-art] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-intarea-frag-fragile-13

2019-08-06 Thread Alissa Cooper
Pete, thanks for your review. Fred, thanks for updating the text. I entered a DISCUSS ballot to chat about Section 6.1. Alissa > On Jul 6, 2019, at 1:11 AM, Pete Resnick wrote: > > On 5 Jul 2019, at 10:00, Fred Baker wrote: > >>> In Section 2.1 and 2.2, Instead of "set to one" and "set to

Re: [Gen-art] [MMUSIC] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-mmusic-ice-sip-sdp-36

2019-08-06 Thread Roman Shpount
Stewart and Alissa, I have reviewed Chister's response for this issue and re-read RFC4091/4092, and now agree with Christer: We can remove the section about ANAT and references to RFC4091/4092. Best Regards, _ Roman Shpount On Tue, Aug 6, 2019 at 12:52 PM Roman Shpount wrote: >

Re: [Gen-art] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-mpls-rfc8287-len-clarification-02

2019-08-06 Thread Alissa Cooper
Ines, thanks for your review. I entered a DISCUSS ballot to get the figure fixed in Section 4.2. Alissa > On Jul 30, 2019, at 8:11 AM, Ines Robles via Datatracker > wrote: > > Reviewer: Ines Robles > Review result: Ready with Issues > > I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft.

Re: [Gen-art] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-curdle-ssh-ed25519-ed448-07

2019-08-06 Thread Linda Dunbar
Okay. Linda -Original Message- From: Gen-art On Behalf Of Alissa Cooper Sent: Tuesday, August 06, 2019 12:39 PM To: Linda Dunbar Cc: draft-ietf-curdle-ssh-ed25519-ed448@ietf.org; gen-art@ietf.org; cur...@ietf.org; i...@ietf.org Subject: Re: [Gen-art] Genart last call review of

Re: [Gen-art] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-manet-dlep-latency-extension-04

2019-08-06 Thread Alissa Cooper
Stewart, thanks for your review. I entered a No Objection ballot. Comments below. > On Jun 26, 2019, at 5:57 AM, Stewart Bryant via Datatracker > wrote: > > Reviewer: Stewart Bryant > Review result: Ready with Nits > > I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area >

Re: [Gen-art] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-curdle-ssh-ed25519-ed448-07

2019-08-06 Thread Alissa Cooper
Linda, thanks for your review. The IANA registries into which this document makes new registrations follow the IETF Review policy, which requires an RFC published in the IETF stream. Arguably it could have been informational but I don’t see a down side to publishing it on the standards track.

Re: [Gen-art] Gen-ART Last Call review of draft-ietf-idr-bgp-extended-messages-33

2019-08-06 Thread Alissa Cooper
Paul, thanks for your review. Randy, thanks for the new text. I entered a No Objection ballot. Alissa > On Jul 4, 2019, at 5:12 PM, Randy Bush wrote: > 2) NIT: Reading the last two security considerations in section 8 leaves me concerned. I was expecting to see some

Re: [Gen-art] [MMUSIC] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-mmusic-ice-sip-sdp-36

2019-08-06 Thread Roman Shpount
Stewart and Alissa, Thank you for the review. The references for RFC 4091 and RFC 4092 are intentional and describe relationship with previous obsoleted implementations. There are still deployed implementations of RFC 4091 and RFC 4092 and ice-sip-sdp states that ICE implementations should be

Re: [Gen-art] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-mmusic-ice-sip-sdp-36

2019-08-06 Thread Alissa Cooper
Stewart, thanks for your review. I entered a DISCUSS ballot to check on the obsoleted references to RFC 4091 and RFC 4092. Alissa > On Jun 17, 2019, at 6:05 AM, Stewart Bryant via Datatracker > wrote: > > Reviewer: Stewart Bryant > Review result: Ready with Nits > > I am the assigned

Re: [Gen-art] [manet] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-manet-dlep-lid-extension-05

2019-08-06 Thread Rick Taylor
Hi Stewart, Thanks for the prompt review. We will wait for a few more reviews and publish a fixed document. Many thanks, Rick > -Original Message- > From: manet [mailto:manet-boun...@ietf.org] On Behalf Of Stewart Bryant > via Datatracker > Sent: 06 August 2019 10:04 > To:

[Gen-art] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-manet-dlep-lid-extension-05

2019-08-06 Thread Stewart Bryant via Datatracker
Reviewer: Stewart Bryant Review result: Ready with Nits I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed by the IESG for the IETF Chair. Please treat these comments just like any other last call comments. For