Re: [Gen-art] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-lamps-crmf-update-algs-04

2021-03-26 Thread Ines Robles
Hi Russ, Thank you very much for addressing my comments promptly. I am ok with your proposals. BR, Ines On Fri, Mar 26, 2021 at 9:27 PM Russ Housley wrote: > Ines Robles: > > Thank you for the careful review and comments. > > > Nits/Comments: > > > > 1- Introduction: "however, these

Re: [Gen-art] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-lamps-crmf-update-algs-04

2021-03-26 Thread Russ Housley
Ines Robles: Thank you for the careful review and comments. > Nits/Comments: > > 1- Introduction: "however, these algorithms are no longer > considered the best choices. " => It would be nice to add 1 or more > sentences explaining why they are no longer the best choices I suggest:

Re: [Gen-art] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-acme-authority-token-tnauthlist-07

2021-03-26 Thread Chris Wendt
Thanks Pete for the review i have addressed the nits, including the abundance of MUSTs :) and will release in a next version 08 include other review comments. -Chris > On Mar 15, 2021, at 4:06 PM, Pete Resnick via Datatracker > wrote: > > Reviewer: Pete Resnick > Review result: Ready with

[Gen-art] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-lamps-crmf-update-algs-04

2021-03-26 Thread Ines Robles via Datatracker
Reviewer: Ines Robles Review result: Ready with Nits I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed by the IESG for the IETF Chair. Please treat these comments just like any other last call comments. For more

Re: [Gen-art] [EXTERNAL] Genart telechat review of draft-ietf-ace-oauth-params-13

2021-03-26 Thread Seitz Ludwig
Hello Elwyn, Thank you for you review. I have fixed the nit you pointed out in the new version of the draft (-14). /Ludwig > -Original Message- > From: Elwyn Davies via Datatracker > Sent: den 23 mars 2021 23:53 > To: gen-art@ietf.org > Cc: a...@ietf.org;