Hi Elwyn, Thanks for the review; responses below.
> On 24 Dec 2021, at 1:41 am, Elwyn Davies via Datatracker <nore...@ietf.org> > wrote: > > s2.3, para 4: The infomational reference [AGE-PENALTY] is not a publically > available document. This is not a vital reference and I expect that people > trying to build a CDN cache system would be aware of this discussion but it > would be useful to have a reference that is publically available to explain > the > issue. Did you click on 'publisher site', which (at least from my browsers) leads to a PDF? > Nits/editorial comments: > > s2.1, para 1: A reference to the IANA page for the is desirable > (https://www.iana.org/assignments/http-cache-directives/http-cache-directives.xhtml) See: https://github.com/httpwg/http-extensions/commit/04dc6e16438568 > s2.2, para 1: s/A cache that implement/A cache that implements/ See: https://github.com/httpwg/http-extensions/commit/f64e767699 > s2.3, para 1: In the last sentence: > In particular, a targeted cache might have longer freshness lifetimes > available > to it than other caches, causing it to serve responses that appear to be > prematurely (or even immediately) stale to them, > > It needs to be adjusted to make it clear what the final 'them' refer to.. Suggestions welcome; it's reasonably clear to me. Cheers, -- Mark Nottingham https://www.mnot.net/ _______________________________________________ Gen-art mailing list Gen-art@ietf.org https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/gen-art
