Re: [Gen-art] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-httpbis-client-cert-field-04

2023-02-24 Thread Brian Campbell
FWIW, I've prepared this PR with those changes https://github.com/httpwg/http-extensions/pull/2425 A preview can be seen here https://httpwg.org/http-extensions/cert/genart-review/draft-ietf-httpbis-client-cert-field.html As well as a diff

Re: [Gen-art] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-httpbis-client-cert-field-04

2023-02-24 Thread Brian Campbell
Thank you Peter for the thorough review! I'll make those clarifications re: Client-Cert and Client-Cert-Chain in sec 2 and the appx. Although I think adding the root certificate to Client-Cert-Chain is more of a 'can' than a 'should' depending on deployment needs. Regardless, I'll add some text

Re: [Gen-art] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-oauth-step-up-authn-challenge-11

2023-02-24 Thread Vittorio Bertocci
Thanks Christer for your thorough review! A new draft ( https://www.ietf.org/archive/id/draft-ietf-oauth-step-up-authn-challenge-12.html) reflecting changes resulting from the feedback has been published. Comments inline On Thu, Feb 23, 2023 at 9:13 AM Christer Holmberg via Datatracker <

[Gen-art] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-httpbis-client-cert-field-04

2023-02-24 Thread Peter Yee via Datatracker
Reviewer: Peter Yee Review result: Ready with Issues I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed by the IESG for the IETF Chair. Please treat these comments just like any other last call comments. For more