[Gen-art] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-core-target-attr-05

2023-08-08 Thread Peter Yee via Datatracker
Reviewer: Peter Yee Review result: Ready I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed by the IESG for the IETF Chair. Please treat these comments just like any other last call comments. For more information,

[Gen-art] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-wish-whip-09

2023-08-08 Thread Dale Worley via Datatracker
Reviewer: Dale Worley Review result: Ready with Issues I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed by the IESG for the IETF Chair. Please treat these comments just like any other last call comments. For