Re: [Gen-art] (full) review of draft-ietf-dime-rfc3588bis-25.txt

2010-12-11 Thread Francis Dupont
In your previous mail you wrote: francis.dup...@fdupont.fr [mailto:francis.dup...@fdupont.fr] writes: ... Nits/editorial comments: Technical: - 13 page 147: I have a concern about 'TLS or IPsec handshake' because there is no such thing like 'IPsec

Re: [Gen-art] (full) review of draft-ietf-dime-rfc3588bis-25.txt

2010-12-10 Thread Glen Zorn
francis.dup...@fdupont.fr [mailto:francis.dup...@fdupont.fr] writes: ... Nits/editorial comments: Technical: - 13 page 147: I have a concern about 'TLS or IPsec handshake' because there is no such thing like 'IPsec handshake'. I suggest to ask IPsec people to check if this must

[Gen-art] (full) review of draft-ietf-dime-rfc3588bis-25.txt

2010-10-28 Thread Francis Dupont
I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. For background on Gen-ART, please see the FAQ at http://wiki.tools.ietf.org/area/gen/trac/wiki/GenArtfaq. Please resolve these comments along with any other Last Call comments you may receive. Document: draft-ietf-dime-rfc3588bis-25.txt