Hi Russ, Ack on both comments. Will be modified in the next revision. Thanks, Danny
-----Original Message----- From: dmm [mailto:dmm-boun...@ietf.org] On Behalf Of Russ Housley Sent: Sunday, February 17, 2019 23:55 To: gen-art@ietf.org Cc: draft-ietf-dmm-ondemand-mobility....@ietf.org; i...@ietf.org; d...@ietf.org Subject: [DMM] Genart telechat review of draft-ietf-dmm-ondemand-mobility-16 Reviewer: Russ Housley Review result: Ready I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed by the IESG for the IETF Chair. Please treat these comments just like any other last call comments. For more information, please see the FAQ at <http://wiki.tools.ietf.org/area/gen/trac/wiki/GenArtfaq>. Document: draft-ietf-dmm-ondemand-mobility-16 Reviewer: Russ Housley Review Date: 2019-02-17 IETF LC End Date: 2019-02-15 IESG Telechat date: 2019-02-21 Summary: Ready Major Concerns: None. Minor Concerns: None. Nits: In the Abstract: s/section 4 of [RFC7333]/RFC 7333/ (because references are not permitted in the Abstract). In Section 3.1, last paragraph: drop the '(' and ')'. _______________________________________________ dmm mailing list d...@ietf.org https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/dmm --------------------------------------------------------------------- A member of the Intel Corporation group of companies This e-mail and any attachments may contain confidential material for the sole use of the intended recipient(s). Any review or distribution by others is strictly prohibited. If you are not the intended recipient, please contact the sender and delete all copies. _______________________________________________ Gen-art mailing list Gen-art@ietf.org https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/gen-art
