Hi,
Thank You for addressing my comments! :)
Regards
Christer
From: Daniel Migault
Sent: Wednesday, 19 October 2022 20.27
To: Christer Holmberg
Cc: gen-art >> General area reviewing team ;
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Hi Christer,
We followed Tim's recommendation to put the early subsection as sections to
make the introduction more concise.
We added the following text to section 3, which I hope addresses your
concern.
This section provides an overview of the architecture for outsourcing the
authoritative
Hi,
>Thanks for the review. I do agree with you the introduction is taken as a
>whole quite long. Its current structure resulted from (multiple) discussions
>where we have been told to clarify some upcoming
>questions many people in the group would come up with and needed to be
>clarified.
Hi Christer,
Thanks for the review. I do agree with you the introduction is taken as a
whole quite long. Its current structure resulted from (multiple)
discussions where we have been told to clarify some upcoming questions many
people in the group would come up with and needed to be clarified.
