Re: [Gen-art] GEN-ART review of draft-ietf-mip4-generic-notification-message

2009-09-08 Thread Hui Deng
Dear Sean. Thanks for your review, reply inline And I have updated the darft to versioin 11, please kindly help to check it again 2009/9/7 Sean Turner turn...@ieca.com: I have been selected as the General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) reviewer for this draft (for background on Gen-ART, please

[Gen-art] GEN-ART review of draft-ietf-mip4-generic-notification-message

2009-09-07 Thread Sean Turner
I have been selected as the General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) reviewer for this draft (for background on Gen-ART, please see http://www.alvestrand.no/ietf/gen/art/gen-art-FAQ.html). Please resolve these comments along with any other Last Call comments you may receive. Document: