Re: [Gen-art] Gen-ART LC Review of draft-ietf-ipfix-data-link-layer-monitoring-06

2013-11-21 Thread Jari Arkko
All - thank you for the review the fixes! Jari On Nov 5, 2013, at 9:09 PM, Ben Campbell b...@nostrum.com wrote: Hi, The revised version addresses all of my Gen-ART review comments. Thanks! Ben. On Nov 4, 2013, at 8:16 PM, Benoit Claise bcla...@cisco.com wrote: Ben, A new

Re: [Gen-art] Gen-ART LC Review of draft-ietf-ipfix-data-link-layer-monitoring-06

2013-11-05 Thread Ben Campbell
Hi, The revised version addresses all of my Gen-ART review comments. Thanks! Ben. On Nov 4, 2013, at 8:16 PM, Benoit Claise bcla...@cisco.com wrote: Ben, A new draft version has been posted https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-ipfix-data-link-layer-monitoring/ Regards, Benoit

Re: [Gen-art] Gen-ART LC Review of draft-ietf-ipfix-data-link-layer-monitoring-06

2013-11-04 Thread Benoit Claise
On 31/10/2013 09:05, Paul Aitken wrote: Thanks for the review, Ben. As you pointed out, the description in 3.2.18 wrongly specified a delta rather than a total; I've fixed it. I also clarified the third paragraph of the Introduction to say that the existing models don't yet contain enough

Re: [Gen-art] Gen-ART LC Review of draft-ietf-ipfix-data-link-layer-monitoring-06

2013-11-04 Thread Benoit Claise
Ben, A new draft version has been posted https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-ipfix-data-link-layer-monitoring/ Regards, Benoit Thanks for the response. Those changes would address all of my comments. Thanks! Ben. On Oct 31, 2013, at 11:05 AM, Paul Aitken pait...@cisco.com wrote:

Re: [Gen-art] Gen-ART LC Review of draft-ietf-ipfix-data-link-layer-monitoring-06

2013-10-31 Thread Paul Aitken
Thanks for the review, Ben. As you pointed out, the description in 3.2.18 wrongly specified a delta rather than a total; I've fixed it. I also clarified the third paragraph of the Introduction to say that the existing models don't yet contain enough elements - which is the point of this

Re: [Gen-art] Gen-ART LC Review of draft-ietf-ipfix-data-link-layer-monitoring-06

2013-10-31 Thread Ben Campbell
Thanks for the response. Those changes would address all of my comments. Thanks! Ben. On Oct 31, 2013, at 11:05 AM, Paul Aitken pait...@cisco.com wrote: Thanks for the review, Ben. As you pointed out, the description in 3.2.18 wrongly specified a delta rather than a total; I've fixed it.

[Gen-art] Gen-ART LC Review of draft-ietf-ipfix-data-link-layer-monitoring-06

2013-10-22 Thread Ben Campbell
I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. For background on Gen-ART, please see the FAQ at http://wiki.tools.ietf.org/area/gen/trac/wiki/GenArtfaq. Please resolve these comments along with any other Last Call comments you may receive. Document: