On 9/18/12 8:45 PM, Ben Campbell wrote:
Nits/editorial comments:
-- IDNits has some complaints; please check.
They were checked.
-- The abstract should mention that this obsoletes 5721
It does.
-- section 2.1, 2nd paragraph: The character encoding format of maildrops may not
On 9/21/12 10:23 AM, Pete Resnick wrote:
-- The abstract should mention that this obsoletes 5721
It does.
Sorry. You said abstract, not intro. Got it.
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On 09/21/2012 10:44 PM, Pete Resnick wrote:
On 9/21/12 10:23 AM, Pete Resnick wrote:
-- The abstract should mention that this obsoletes 5721
Why? There is a statement in the header, 10 lines above the abstract,
that says Obsoletes: 5721 (if approved).
It does.
Sorry. You said
On Sep 21, 2012, at 10:52 AM, Glen Zorn glenz...@gmail.com wrote:
On 09/21/2012 10:44 PM, Pete Resnick wrote:
On 9/21/12 10:23 AM, Pete Resnick wrote:
-- The abstract should mention that this obsoletes 5721
Why? There is a statement in the header, 10 lines above the abstract, that
On 9/21/2012 8:23 AM, Pete Resnick wrote:
On 9/18/12 8:45 PM, Ben Campbell wrote:abstract should mention that this
obsoletes 5721
It does.
Stylistic point: RFCs last a long time. Including ephemeral
information can be distracting, especially in the Abstract. 5 and 10
years from now,
Thanks for the response!
On Sep 21, 2012, at 10:23 AM, Pete Resnick presn...@qualcomm.com wrote:
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-- same paragraph : The UTF8 command MAY fail.
Under what circumstances? (this seems sort of tacked onto the
paragraph--does it belong there?)
AFAICT, it is simply a warning to
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Document: draft-ietf-eai-rfc5721bis-07
Reviewer:
On Sep 18, 2012, at 8:18 PM, Ben Campbell b...@nostrum.com wrote:
I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. For background on
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Please resolve these comments along with any other Last Call
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