Re: [Gen-art] Gen-ART LC review of draft-ietf-trill-channel-tunnel-09

2016-07-02 Thread Peter Yee
Donald, >> For cases of "[RFC5310] Based authentication" to "[RFC5310]-based >> authentication". Watch for one instance of "RFC 5310 Based" as well. >OK. >(Nit-Nit: I think in the nit above, the first word should be Four.) Ha! (I hadn't actually counted the number of cases. ) >> Page 12, 1s

Re: [Gen-art] Gen-ART LC review of draft-ietf-trill-channel-tunnel-09

2016-07-02 Thread Donald Eastlake
Hi Peter, Thanks for your thorough review. See below. On Sat, Jul 2, 2016 at 2:33 AM, Peter Yee wrote: > > I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area Review > Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed by the IESG for > the IETF Chair. Please treat these

[Gen-art] Gen-ART LC review of draft-ietf-trill-channel-tunnel-09

2016-07-01 Thread Peter Yee
I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed by the IESG for the IETF Chair. Please treat these comments just like any other last call comment. For background on Gen-ART, please see the FAQ at