Re: [Gen-art] Gen-ART Last Call review of draft-ietf-idr-bgp-extended-messages-33

2019-08-06 Thread Alissa Cooper
Paul, thanks for your review. Randy, thanks for the new text. I entered a No Objection ballot. Alissa > On Jul 4, 2019, at 5:12 PM, Randy Bush wrote: > 2) NIT: Reading the last two security considerations in section 8 leaves me concerned. I was expecting to see some furth

Re: [Gen-art] Gen-ART Last Call review of draft-ietf-idr-bgp-extended-messages-33

2019-07-04 Thread Randy Bush
>>> 2) NIT: >>> >>> Reading the last two security considerations in section 8 leaves me >>> concerned. I was expecting to see some further discussion of how these >>> issues can be mitigated, or why it is OK that they are not. >> >> i am not sure if there are mitigations. >> >> i believe that th

[Gen-art] Gen-ART Last Call review of draft-ietf-idr-bgp-extended-messages-33 UPDATED

2019-07-04 Thread Paul Kyzivat
I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed by the IESG for the IETF Chair. Please treat these comments just like any other last call comments. For more information, please see the FAQ at

Re: [Gen-art] Gen-ART Last Call review of draft-ietf-idr-bgp-extended-messages-33

2019-07-04 Thread Paul Kyzivat
Randy, On 7/4/19 2:28 PM, Randy Bush wrote: paul, thanks for the review. appreciated. The Abstract and Introduction are written in the abstract, implying (to me) that the requirements here are intended to be broadly applicable for the stated purposes, over an extended period of time. On the

Re: [Gen-art] Gen-ART Last Call review of draft-ietf-idr-bgp-extended-messages-33

2019-07-04 Thread Randy Bush
paul, thanks for the review. appreciated. > The Abstract and Introduction are written in the abstract, implying > (to me) that the requirements here are intended to be broadly > applicable for the stated purposes, over an extended period of > time. On the other hand, I get the impression that re

[Gen-art] Gen-ART Last Call review of draft-ietf-idr-bgp-extended-messages-33

2019-07-04 Thread Paul Kyzivat
I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed by the IESG for the IETF Chair. Please treat these comments just like any other last call comments. For more information, please see the FAQ at