This draft was approved for publication (at 06), and then pulled from the
RFC Editor queue for revisions to meet requirements of other SDOs, including
OMA. It's being re-Last Called, because of the scope of changes made after
approval.
As the Gen-ART reviewer for 06
(http://www.alvestrand.no/ietf/gen/reviews/draft-ietf-simple-xcap-050217-dawkins.txt),
I re-reviewed version 11 for Last Call.
This draft is almost ready for publication as a Proposed Standard. There is
one burst of incoherency that should be fixed. In 8.2.3, this text appears:
Not any <bar> element may precede one or multiple <foo> elements.
I have no idea how this actually parses - was the intention that "No <bar>
element...", or something else?
This comment should be processed with any other comments received at Last
Call.
I should also say that the updated sections seem much clearer than the 05-06
versions of the corresponding text. Good job.
Thanks,
Spencer
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