Re: [Gen-art] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-dnsop-attrleaf-fix-04

2018-10-10 Thread Alissa Cooper
Francesa, thanks for your review. Dave, thanks for your responses. I entered a DISCUSS ballot based on the issue raised about unused citations. Typically the abstract does contain an explanation of the document(s) being updated. In this case the list is so long that I’m not sure it’s worth it.

Re: [Gen-art] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-dnsop-attrleaf-fix-04

2018-09-26 Thread Dave Crocker
Henrik, Thanks for the quick followup... On 9/26/2018 1:08 PM, Henrik Levkowetz wrote: I think xml2rfc does the right thing. The quotes are provided by you, the author, not the processor, and you've enclosed the element completely in the quotes: yeah, sorry. played with the combinatorials

Re: [Gen-art] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-dnsop-attrleaf-fix-04

2018-09-26 Thread Henrik Levkowetz
Hi Dave, Responding only to the xml2rfc issue, not to the document content: On 2018-09-26 21:24, Dave Crocker wrote: > On 9/24/2018 6:16 AM, Dave Crocker wrote: >>> >>> + Those registered by IANA in the "Service Name and Transport >>> Protocol Port Number Registry [RFC6335]"

Re: [Gen-art] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-dnsop-attrleaf-fix-04

2018-09-26 Thread Dave Crocker
On 9/24/2018 6:16 AM, Dave Crocker wrote:     +  Those registered by IANA in the "Service Name and Transport Protocol Port Number Registry [RFC6335]" Move the end quote after Registry. ok.  Good catch. Interesting. Just discovered that this probably qualifies as a bug in the

Re: [Gen-art] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-dnsop-attrleaf-fix-04

2018-09-24 Thread Dave Crocker
Hi. Thanks for the detailed comments. Some responses... On 9/24/2018 3:00 AM, Francesca Palombini wrote: The use of underscored node names is specific to each RRTYPE that is being scoped. As an non-expert in the area, I would have appreciate a ref to a document introducing RRTYPE.

[Gen-art] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-dnsop-attrleaf-fix-04

2018-09-24 Thread Francesca Palombini
Reviewer: Francesca Palombini Review result: Ready with Nits I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed by the IESG for the IETF Chair. Please treat these comments just like any other last call comments.