Re: [Gen-art] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-hip-rfc4423-bis-18

Hi Joel, done! The new version with your suggested changes and diff are here: https://www.ietf.org/internet-drafts/draft-ietf-hip-rfc4423-bis-19.txt https://www.ietf.org/rfcdiff?url2=draft-ietf-hip-rfc4423-bis-19 P.S. I took the liberty to fix a small typo from the text: drop HIP-base

Re: [Gen-art] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-hip-rfc4423-bis-18

These changes very nicely address my concerns.b You should check with your chair,and AD before submitting a,revision. Thank you,Joel Sent via the Samsung Galaxy S® 6, an AT 4G LTE smartphone Original message From: Miika Komu Date: 2/26/18 06:56

Re: [Gen-art] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-hip-rfc4423-bis-18

Hi Joel, thanks for the nice review! My suggested changes for HIP architecture document are below (in "diff" format). On 02/18/2018 07:33 AM, Joel Halpern wrote: Reviewer: Joel Halpern Review result: Ready with Nits I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area Review

[Gen-art] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-hip-rfc4423-bis-18

Reviewer: Joel Halpern Review result: Ready with Nits I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed by the IESG for the IETF Chair. Please treat these comments just like any other last call comments. For more