Re: [Gen-art] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-ipsecme-mib-iptfs-04

2022-10-20 Thread Lars Eggert
Joel, thank you for your review. I have entered a Discuss ballot for this document based on my own review. Lars > On 2022-9-22, at 1:50, Joel Halpern via Datatracker wrote: > > Reviewer: Joel Halpern > Review result: Almost Ready > > I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The Gen

Re: [Gen-art] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-ipsecme-mib-iptfs-04

2022-09-29 Thread Don Fedyk
Hi Joel It was for this specific area it was requested. We did explore an automated/mechanical way of doing this but in the end, it was easier to do by hand. The organization of this MIB maps closely to the YANG model. In other cases, I have dealt with existing MIBs and new YANG this is not the

Re: [Gen-art] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-ipsecme-mib-iptfs-04

2022-09-29 Thread Joel Halpern
That suffices for the document and my review.  Whether it suffices for the community and IESG is up to them.  (I wonder about the precedent of defining MIBs for monitoring every new thing we do.  But that is up to others, not something you can fix in this document.) Yours, Joel On 9/29/2022

Re: [Gen-art] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-ipsecme-mib-iptfs-04

2022-09-29 Thread Don Fedyk
Hi Joel The reason this was requested by the community is that there is SNMP management equipment deployed that they would like to be able use for monitoring IP-TFS. I suggest I add this text to clearify. OLD: The objects defined here are the same as [I-D.ietf-ipsecme-yang-iptfs] with the

[Gen-art] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-ipsecme-mib-iptfs-04

2022-09-21 Thread Joel Halpern via Datatracker
Reviewer: Joel Halpern Review result: Almost Ready I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed by the IESG for the IETF Chair. Please treat these comments just like any other last call comments. For more inf