Re: [Gen-art] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-kitten-tls-channel-bindings-for-tls13-09

2021-10-18 Thread Sam Whited
Looks like the same link got included twice? But thank you, I'll try to rework the language again to reference that. —Sam On Mon, Oct 18, 2021, at 00:50, Benjamin Kaduk wrote: > On Fri, Oct 15, 2021 at 11:25:01PM -0400, Dale R. Worley wrote: >> "Sam Whited" writes: >> >> The appearance of this

Re: [Gen-art] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-kitten-tls-channel-bindings-for-tls13-09

2021-10-17 Thread Benjamin Kaduk
On Fri, Oct 15, 2021 at 11:25:01PM -0400, Dale R. Worley wrote: > "Sam Whited" writes: > >> The appearance of this paragraph in this section suggests (but does > >> not assert) that in TLS 1.3, the cipher negotiation always results in > >> unique master secrets. Indeed, it would be extremely

Re: [Gen-art] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-kitten-tls-channel-bindings-for-tls13-09

2021-10-15 Thread Dale R. Worley
"Sam Whited" writes: >> The appearance of this paragraph in this section suggests (but does >> not assert) that in TLS 1.3, the cipher negotiation always results in >> unique master secrets. Indeed, it would be extremely convenient if >> (standard-conformant) use of TLS 1.3 always did so, and if

Re: [Gen-art] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-kitten-tls-channel-bindings-for-tls13-09

2021-10-15 Thread Sam Whited
Thank you for the detailed review! I believe I have addressed your feedback in a draft that I will upload shortly, but have a few comments (inline). On Thu, Oct 14, 2021, at 20:20, Dale Worley via Datatracker wrote: > Given that this is the introduction and RFC 5929 is referenced without > its

[Gen-art] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-kitten-tls-channel-bindings-for-tls13-09

2021-10-14 Thread Dale Worley via Datatracker
Reviewer: Dale Worley Review result: Ready with Nits I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed by the IESG for the IETF Chair. Please treat these comments just like any other last call comments. For more