Re: [Gen-art] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-netconf-crypto-types-28

2024-02-01 Thread Lars Eggert
Dale, thank you for your review. I have entered a No Objection ballot for this document. Lars > On Jan 22, 2024, at 17:46, Dale Worley via Datatracker > wrote: > > Reviewer: Dale Worley > Review result: Ready with Nits > > I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area

Re: [Gen-art] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-netconf-crypto-types-28

2024-01-30 Thread Dale R. Worley
OK, good ... Kent Watsen writes: Table 1: Label to RFC Mapping In -28, this caption appears visually to be the caption of both the dependency diagram at the top of page 5 and the label-to-RFC mapping table at the bottom of page 5, and so probably should be amended to

Re: [Gen-art] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-netconf-crypto-types-28

2024-01-29 Thread Kent Watsen
Hi Dale, > On Jan 29, 2024, at 2:15 PM, Dale R. Worley wrote: > > Kent Watsen writes: >> [...] > > All of the fixes look good to me and require no comment, except the > following items: > >>> Table 1: Label to RFC Mapping >>> >>> In -28, this caption appears visually to be the caption of

Re: [Gen-art] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-netconf-crypto-types-28

2024-01-29 Thread Dale R. Worley
Kent Watsen writes: > [...] All of the fixes look good to me and require no comment, except the following items: >> Table 1: Label to RFC Mapping >> >> In -28, this caption appears visually to be the caption of both the >> dependency diagram at the top of page 5 and the label-to-RFC mapping

Re: [Gen-art] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-netconf-crypto-types-28

2024-01-26 Thread Kent Watsen
Hi Dale, Thank you for your review! Please see below for responses to your comments. Kent > On Jan 22, 2024, at 10:46 AM, Dale Worley via Datatracker > wrote: > > Reviewer: Dale Worley > Review result: Ready with Nits > > I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area

[Gen-art] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-netconf-crypto-types-28

2024-01-22 Thread Dale Worley via Datatracker
Reviewer: Dale Worley Review result: Ready with Nits I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed by the IESG for the IETF Chair. Please treat these comments just like any other last call comments. For more