Re: [Gen-art] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-oauth-device-flow-10

2018-08-01 Thread Robert Sparks
Answering your question inline: On 8/1/18 6:55 PM, William Denniss wrote: Robert, Thank you for your valuable feedback. Version 12 incorporates your feedback. Replies inline: On Mon, Jun 11, 2018 at 9:20 AM, Robert Sparks > wrote: Reviewer: Robert Sparks

Re: [Gen-art] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-oauth-device-flow-10

2018-08-01 Thread William Denniss
Robert, Thank you for your valuable feedback. Version 12 incorporates your feedback. Replies inline: On Mon, Jun 11, 2018 at 9:20 AM, Robert Sparks wrote: > Reviewer: Robert Sparks > Review result: Ready with Nits > > I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area > Review

Re: [Gen-art] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-oauth-device-flow-10

2018-07-31 Thread William Denniss
Thank you Robert, and Alissa, we really appreciate you feedback. My co-authors and I are processing yours and all the feedback received so far. We'll reply to your points in the coming days. On Tue, Jul 31, 2018 at 8:58 AM, Alissa Cooper wrote: > Robert, thanks for your review. I have pointed

Re: [Gen-art] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-oauth-device-flow-10

2018-07-31 Thread Alissa Cooper
Robert, thanks for your review. I have pointed to it in my No Objection ballot. Alissa > On Jul 20, 2018, at 1:37 PM, Robert Sparks wrote: > > As far as I can tell, there has been no response to this. The document > revision just updated a reference to reflect an rfc having been published. >

Re: [Gen-art] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-oauth-device-flow-10

2018-07-20 Thread Robert Sparks
As far as I can tell, there has been no response to this. The document revision just updated a reference to reflect an rfc having been published. Apologies if I missed a response. RjS On 6/11/18 12:20 PM, Robert Sparks wrote: Reviewer: Robert Sparks Review result: Ready with Nits I am the

[Gen-art] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-oauth-device-flow-10

2018-06-11 Thread Robert Sparks
Reviewer: Robert Sparks Review result: Ready with Nits I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed by the IESG for the IETF Chair. Please treat these comments just like any other last call comments. For