Thanks a lot Elwyn
Changes for your review have been committed together with changes for Alissa's
review
into just posted -17 rev of the doc.
rfcdiff here:
Elwyn, thanks for your reviews. Authors/editors, thanks for addressing Elwyn’s
previous comments. I have pointed to his latest round in my ballot. I balloted
DISCUSS based on one point in Section 6.10.4.
Alissa
> On Jul 31, 2018, at 8:05 PM, Elwyn Davies wrote:
>
> Reviewer: Elwyn Davies
>
Reviewer: Elwyn Davies
Review result: Ready with Nits
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