Francis Dupont writes:
Nits/editorial comments:
- 1 page 3: I.e. - I.e.,
- 1 page 4: adminstrator - administrator
- 1 page 4 (dubious wording): shared secret (\n) shared
- 1 page 4: adminstrative - administrative
- 1 page 4 (twice): i.e. - i.e.,
- 2 page 6 (4 times);
I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. For background on
Gen-ART, please see the FAQ at
http://wiki.tools.ietf.org/area/gen/trac/wiki/GenArtfaq.
Please resolve these comments along with any other Last Call comments
you may receive.
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