I have been selected as the General Area Review Team (Gen-ART)
reviewer for this draft (for background on Gen-ART, please see
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Please resolve these comments along with any other Last Call comments
you may receive.
Document: draft-ietf-isis-caps-06.txt
Reviewer: Francis Dupont
Review Date: 27 october 2006
IETF LC Date: 19 october 2006
IESG Telechat date: (if known)
Summary: Ready with nits
Comments: there are some little details which should be fixed (nothing
critical and nothing which cannot be fixed by the RFC editor) :
- 1 page 2: I know what is IS-IS but a random reader likely doesn't:
add a reference to the ISO IS (i.e., [IS-IS]) in the first sentence.
(and perhaps add IS-IS-IP too, cf last comment).
- 1 page 2: "two" examples numbered from 1 to 3 (:-)!
- 2 page 3: I don't understand the "to prevent TLV looping" but
perhaps it is not "TLV" looping?
- 3 page 3: I don't like the term "domain flooding scope", it seems a
bit redundant to me.
- 3 page 4: "stale capabilities information A system"
^^ ", a "?
- 9.1 page 6: is ISIS-TE really a normative reference? BTW there is no
reference in the text (same for the previous item, there is a nice
checker for this: I suggest to use it...)
Regards
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PS: the list of authors doesn't match the list of editors, I expect you
looked at the detailed instructions about this in the RFC editor documents.
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