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Please resolve these comments along with any other Last Call comments you may receive. Document: draft-ietf-krb-wg-gss-cb-hash-agility-08.txt Reviewer: Francis Dupont Review Date: 20111105 IETF LC End Date: 20111107 IESG Telechat date: unknown Summary: Ready Major issues: None Minor issues: None Nits/editorial comments: - ToC page 2: please get a rule about caps and keep it (i.e., either put a cap only in the first word or to all words, and avoid considerations and Considerations in two following lines :-) - Toc page 2 and 6 page 10: Acknowledgements -> Acknowledgments - 3 page 7: ecryption -> encryption - Author's Address page 11: US -> USA BTW if you find a way (or someone) to improve the general wording style, please do it (a document of this length should be more pleasant to read IMHO...) Regards francis.dup...@fdupont.fr _______________________________________________ Gen-art mailing list Gen-art@ietf.org https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/gen-art
