Re: [Gen-art] review of draft-ietf-pim-lasthop-threats-04.txt

2008-05-26 Thread Pekka Savola
Hi Francis, Thanks for your mostly editorial comments. Wrt your GDOI comment, I asked MSEC chairs and they were fine with that text. We worked up some editorial improvements in another paragraph, however. There were no other Last Call comments. I think the document is in good enough shape fo

[Gen-art] review of draft-ietf-pim-lasthop-threats-04.txt

2008-05-20 Thread Francis Dupont
I have been selected as the General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) reviewer for this draft (for background on Gen-ART, please see http://www.alvestrand.no/ietf/gen/art/gen-art-FAQ.html). Please resolve these comments along with any other Last Call comments you may receive. Document: draft-ietf-pim-l