I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. For background on Gen-ART, please see the FAQ at <http://wiki.tools.ietf.org/area/gen/trac/wiki/GenArtfaq>.
Please resolve these comments along with any other Last Call comments you may receive. Document: draft-ietf-sidr-rpki-manifests-09.txt Reviewer: Francis Dupont Review Date: 20110323 IETF LC End Date: 20110324 IESG Telechat date: unknown Summary: Ready Major issues: None Minor issues: None Nits/editorial comments: - ToC page 2 and 10 page 16: Acknowledgements -> Acknowledgments - 1 page 3: EE -> End Entity (EE) - 3 page 4: SIA -> SubjectInfoAccess (SIA) (but OID is a well-known abbrev according to the RFC Editor) - 4.2.1: I don't know if the document should be more accurate about the filename syntax? - 4.2.1 pages 5 and 6: modelled -> modeled - 5.1 page 8: IMHO the key point for the security is the 3, isn't it? - 5.2 pahe 9: RPs who -> RPs which ?? - 5.2 page 9: intot he -> into the - 6.1 2 page 10: completness -> completeness - 6.3 page 12: I have a concern about this wording: An invalid manifest MUST never be used even if the manifestNumber is greater than that of other valid manifests. ^^^^^^^^^^^ - 6.6 page 14: endeavour -> endeavor - 10 page 16: behaviour -> behavior Regards francis.dup...@fdupont.fr _______________________________________________ Gen-art mailing list Gen-art@ietf.org https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/gen-art
