Re: [Gen-art] review of draft-moriarty-pkcs12v1-1-03.txt

2014-01-23 Thread Sean Turner
, 2014 10:31 AM To: Moriarty, Kathleen; Sean P. Turner Cc: francis.dup...@fdupont.fr; gen-art@ietf.org; draft-moriarty-pkcs12v1-1@tools.ietf.org Subject: Re: [Gen-art] review of draft-moriarty-pkcs12v1-1-03.txt Thanks for your review, Francis, and for your edits, Kathleen. Do you

Re: [Gen-art] review of draft-moriarty-pkcs12v1-1-03.txt

2014-01-21 Thread Jari Arkko
Thanks for your review, Francis, and for your edits, Kathleen. Do you Kathleen or Sean think that Francis' comment on strengthening the security considerations would be something that you should address? jari On Jan 13, 2014, at 6:02 PM, Moriarty, Kathleen kathleen.moria...@emc.com wrote:

Re: [Gen-art] review of draft-moriarty-pkcs12v1-1-03.txt

2014-01-21 Thread Moriarty, Kathleen
, January 21, 2014 10:31 AM To: Moriarty, Kathleen; Sean P. Turner Cc: francis.dup...@fdupont.fr; gen-art@ietf.org; draft-moriarty-pkcs12v1-1@tools.ietf.org Subject: Re: [Gen-art] review of draft-moriarty-pkcs12v1-1-03.txt Thanks for your review, Francis, and for your edits, Kathleen. Do you

[Gen-art] review of draft-moriarty-pkcs12v1-1-03.txt

2014-01-13 Thread Francis Dupont
I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. For background on Gen-ART, please see the FAQ at http://wiki.tools.ietf.org/area/gen/trac/wiki/GenArtfaq. Please resolve these comments along with any other Last Call comments you may receive. Document: draft-moriarty-pkcs12v1-1-03.txt

Re: [Gen-art] review of draft-moriarty-pkcs12v1-1-03.txt

2014-01-13 Thread Moriarty, Kathleen
Thank you for the review, Francis. Once this version is published, change control and copyright is transferred to the IETF. The next version of this document will work to improve known issues. I will make the change from public/private to private/public as noted, that makes sense. I would

Re: [Gen-art] review of draft-moriarty-pkcs12v1-1-03.txt

2014-01-13 Thread Moriarty, Kathleen
Hi Francis, I went to update your comments in my draft version and in thinking about it more, I agree with the current text on the public/private order. As I read it, the referenced keys are discussed for the keys that validate and I assume you read it as the creation of a signature or to