Re: [Gen-art] Gen-art review of draft-xli-behave-ivi-05.txt

2010-01-12 Thread Xing Li
Hi, Elwyn, Thank you very much. Elwyn Davies 写道: Hi. Version 07 addresses essentially all my previous comments - thanks for the quick work! I noticed a couple of remaining wording issues but these are trivial editorial nits and will be taken care of during the RFC Editor process. With

Re: [Gen-art] Gen-art review of draft-xli-behave-ivi-05.txt

2010-01-07 Thread Elwyn Davies
Hi. Version 07 addresses essentially all my previous comments - thanks for the quick work! I noticed a couple of remaining wording issues but these are trivial editorial nits and will be taken care of during the RFC Editor process. With the short notice, it was clearly infeasible to

Re: [Gen-art] Gen-art review of draft-xli-behave-ivi-05.txt

2010-01-05 Thread Xing Li
Hi, Elwyn, Thank you very much for your review, the comments and corrections. We will make the corrections and try to upload the new version tomorrow. Elwyn Davies 写道: I have been selected as the General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) reviewer for this draft (for background on Gen-ART, please

Re: [Gen-art] Gen-art review of draft-xli-behave-ivi-05.txt

2010-01-05 Thread Xing Li
Hi, Jari, Jari Arkko 写道: Thank you for your review! On quick scan the issues that you raise seem valid ones, and should be addressed by the authors. Thanks. We will make the corrections and try to upload the new version tomorrow. Best regards, xing Jari Elwyn Davies kirjoitti: I

Re: [Gen-art] Gen-art review of draft-xli-behave-ivi-05.txt

2010-01-04 Thread Jari Arkko
Thank you for your review! On quick scan the issues that you raise seem valid ones, and should be addressed by the authors. Jari Elwyn Davies kirjoitti: I have been selected as the General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) reviewer for this draft (for background on Gen-ART, please see