[Gen-art] Gen-art last call review of draft-ietf-ippm-alt-mark-10

2017-09-19 Thread Linda Dunbar
Reviewer: Linda Dunbar Review result: Ready I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed by the IESG for the IETF Chair. Please treat these comments just like any other last call comments. For more

Re: [Gen-art] draft-baeuerle-netnews-cancel-lock-06 and RFCs 5536 & 5322

2017-09-19 Thread Alexey Melnikov
Paul, On Mon, Sep 18, 2017, at 10:14 PM, Paul Kyzivat wrote: > I'm on tap to do the genart telechat review on > draft-baeuerle-netnews-cancel-lock-06. I see that nothing has been done > about the ABNF that was my primary concern in my prior wglc review of > -05: > >

Re: [Gen-art] draft-baeuerle-netnews-cancel-lock-06 and RFCs 5536 & 5322

2017-09-19 Thread Julien ÉLIE
Hi all, > optional-field = > > news-fields = approved / > archive / > control / > distribution / > expires / > followup-to / > injection-date / >

Re: [Gen-art] draft-baeuerle-netnews-cancel-lock-06 and RFCs 5536 & 5322

2017-09-19 Thread Julien ÉLIE
Hi Alexey, The question is: in the meantime, what to do about this draft? By default I guess I will simply restate the issue in my genart telechat review and leave it for the IESG discuss it. As per my comments above, I think we should acknowledge that there is a subtle issue with ABNF in RFC

Re: [Gen-art] draft-baeuerle-netnews-cancel-lock-06 and RFCs 5536 & 5322

2017-09-19 Thread Julien ÉLIE
Hi Paul, Even then, ideally there should have been some words to indicate that the s used as extensions for trace be disjoint from those used as non-trace extension headers. It gets more ugly when we start to extends syntactically via =/. Now, when the syntax is evaluated the new header

Re: [Gen-art] draft-baeuerle-netnews-cancel-lock-06 and RFCs 5536 & 5322

2017-09-19 Thread Paul Kyzivat
On 9/19/17 2:41 PM, Pete Resnick wrote: On 19 Sep 2017, at 9:23, Alexey Melnikov wrote: optional-field =/ *( approved / archive / control / distribution / expires / followup-to / injection-date /

Re: [Gen-art] draft-baeuerle-netnews-cancel-lock-06 and RFCs 5536 & 5322

2017-09-19 Thread Alexey Melnikov
Hi Paul, On Mon, Sep 18, 2017, at 10:14 PM, Paul Kyzivat wrote: > I'm on tap to do the genart telechat review on > draft-baeuerle-netnews-cancel-lock-06. I see that nothing has been done > about the ABNF that was my primary concern in my prior wglc review of > -05: > >

Re: [Gen-art] draft-baeuerle-netnews-cancel-lock-06 and RFCs 5536 & 5322

2017-09-19 Thread Alexey Melnikov
On Tue, Sep 19, 2017, at 10:42 AM, Alexey Melnikov wrote: > Hi Paul, > > On Mon, Sep 18, 2017, at 10:14 PM, Paul Kyzivat wrote: > > I'm on tap to do the genart telechat review on > > draft-baeuerle-netnews-cancel-lock-06. I see that nothing has been done > > about the ABNF that was my primary

Re: [Gen-art] draft-baeuerle-netnews-cancel-lock-06 and RFCs 5536 & 5322

2017-09-19 Thread Paul Kyzivat
On 9/19/17 8:13 AM, Alexey Melnikov wrote: We can also drop "*" in front of "(approved", as this field is already allowed multiple times in an RFC 5322 message. archive / control / distribution /

Re: [Gen-art] draft-baeuerle-netnews-cancel-lock-06 and RFCs 5536 & 5322

2017-09-19 Thread Alexey Melnikov
Hi Paul, On Tue, Sep 19, 2017, at 03:00 PM, Paul Kyzivat wrote: > Hi Alexey, > > On 9/19/17 5:42 AM, Alexey Melnikov wrote: > > Hi Paul, > > > > On Mon, Sep 18, 2017, at 10:14 PM, Paul Kyzivat wrote: > >> I'm on tap to do the genart telechat review on > >> draft-baeuerle-netnews-cancel-lock-06.

Re: [Gen-art] draft-baeuerle-netnews-cancel-lock-06 and RFCs 5536 & 5322

2017-09-19 Thread Paul Kyzivat
Hi Alexey, On 9/19/17 5:42 AM, Alexey Melnikov wrote: Hi Paul, On Mon, Sep 18, 2017, at 10:14 PM, Paul Kyzivat wrote: I'm on tap to do the genart telechat review on draft-baeuerle-netnews-cancel-lock-06. I see that nothing has been done about the ABNF that was my primary concern in my prior

Re: [Gen-art] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-bier-architecture-08

2017-09-19 Thread Dan Romascanu
Hi Alia, Yes, I am aware about this. Yet, there is this little sentence in the WG charter which does not seem to be answered by now :-) 'The scope of the experiment will be documented in the output of the Working Group.' Regards, Dan On Tue, Sep 19, 2017 at 7:46 PM, Alia Atlas

[Gen-art] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-bier-architecture-08

2017-09-19 Thread Dan Romascanu
Reviewer: Dan Romascanu Review result: Ready I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed by the IESG for the IETF Chair. Please treat these comments just like any other last call comments. For more

Re: [Gen-art] draft-baeuerle-netnews-cancel-lock-06 and RFCs 5536 & 5322

2017-09-19 Thread Pete Resnick
On 19 Sep 2017, at 9:23, Alexey Melnikov wrote: optional-field =/ *( approved / archive / control / distribution / expires / followup-to /