Re: [Gen-art] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-6tisch-6top-protocol-10

2018-03-22 Thread Brian E Carpenter 
That looks good to me. I think it will help implementers.

Thanks
   Brian Carpenter

On 22/03/2018 21:41, Xavi Vilajosana Guillen wrote:
> Dear Brian,
> 
> after the WG meeting we proceed to resolve your pointed issue. Thanks so
> much for going through the draft again.
> 
> We will publish v11 with the following update on the text as you suggested.
> We hope this clarifies your point.
> 
> 
> In section 3.1.1.  2-step 6P Transaction
> we added:
> Race conditions MAY happen when a timeout expires while a 6P
>Response is on the air.  Other inconsistencies can also happen
>when the last L2 ACK for a 6P Response is lost or when one of the
>nodes is power cycled.  6P provides an inconsistency detection
>mechanism described in Section 3.4.6.1 to cope with such
>situations.
> 
> 
> In section 3.1.2.  3-step 6P Transaction
> we added:
>   Race conditions MAY happen when a timeout expires while a 6P
>Confirmation is on the air.  Other inconsistencies can also
>happen when the last L2 ACK for a 6P Confirmation is lost or when
>one of the nodes is power cycled.  6P provides an inconsistency
>detection mechanism described in Section 3.4.6.1 to cope with
>such situations.
> 
> 
> kind regards
> Xavi
> 
> 
> 2018-03-11 4:11 GMT+01:00 Brian Carpenter :
> 
>> Reviewer: Brian Carpenter
>> Review result: Ready
>>
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>> Document: draft-ietf-6tisch-6top-protocol-10
>> Reviewer: Brian Carpenter
>> Review Date: 2018-03-10
>> IETF LC End Date: 2018-03-26
>> IESG Telechat date: 2018-04-05
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>> Comment:
>>
>> Most of my previous comments have been fixed, thanks. I still disagree
>> with the authors on one point, but not enough to delay the draft:
>>
>> In section 3.1.1 "2-step 6P Transaction" there seems to be a rare race
>> condition
>> if A's timeout expires while B's Response is in flight. This will be
>> detected
>> later as an inconsistency (section 3.4.6.2). The authors don't think it's
>> necessary
>> to mention this in 3.1.1. IMHO it would be useful to mention. (Similarly
>> for
>> section 3.1.2, 3-step transaction.)
>>
>>
>>
> 
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[Gen-art] Review Assignments

2018-03-22 Thread Jean Mahoney 
Hi all,

The following reviewers have assignments:

For telechat 2018-04-05

Reviewer   Type  LC end Draft
Vijay Gurbani  Last Call 2018-03-28 
draft-ietf-teas-scheduled-resources-06
Paul Kyzivat   Telechat  2018-04-03 
draft-ietf-i2rs-yang-dc-fabric-network-topology-07
Matthew Miller Telechat  2018-03-06 draft-ietf-trill-over-ip-16 *
Dale WorleyTelechat  2018-01-26 
draft-ietf-mmusic-trickle-ice-sip-14 *
Peter Yee  Telechat  2018-03-06 draft-ietf-6lo-rfc6775-update-16 *

For telechat 2018-04-19

Reviewer   Type  LC end Draft
Stewart Bryant Telechat  2018-02-02 
draft-ietf-bmwg-sdn-controller-benchmark-term-09 *
Stewart Bryant Telechat  2018-02-02 
draft-ietf-bmwg-sdn-controller-benchmark-meth-08 *
Brian CarpenterTelechat  None   draft-ietf-stir-rph-03
Linda Dunbar   Telechat  2018-02-14 
draft-ietf-mmusic-sdp-bundle-negotiation-49 *
Roni Even  Last Call 2018-03-30 draft-ietf-core-senml-13
Robert Sparks  Telechat  2017-11-07 draft-ietf-opsawg-mud-18 *
Dale WorleyTelechat  2018-02-20 draft-ietf-tram-stunbis-16 *

For telechat 2018-05-10

Reviewer   Type  LC end Draft
Linda Dunbar   Last Call 2018-03-12 draft-ietf-tokbind-https-12

Last calls:

Reviewer   Type  LC end Draft
Meral Shirazipour  Last Call 2018-04-04 draft-ietf-dprive-padding-policy-04

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  Elwyn Davies
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